June 20th, 2010

plothole

Fragment: Vampires... IN SPACE!

Man, I should not continue to think the terrible, temporary title for this piece is hysterically funny. And yet, I do. Later scene for what I'd posted previously since I'm working out the kinks in the plot that comes before this scene. Also, it's the only "complete" piece I've managed to write in awhile. Everything else has been 1-2 pages added to other in progress stories.

Totally unreviewed for grammar/spelling. I'll probably rewrite it when I get to it's place in the story to make it fit better. But this is the initial draft of the scene.

If you need a refresher on this world, here is the other post on it.

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