How flamebyrd managed to pick the number of the one finished story in my WIP folder I'll never know. This is an old fantasy short story that starts in the middle of the action, is in first person, and is really more poetic than it needs to be. I still like it and always wonder if I'll ever write more in this world.

( The Pard, PG-13 for violence )

Finally sat down at put in order all the werewolf bits I've written about Jesse and Gene. I also gave it a title. Go me! I'm at 14 pages and over 5,000 words. Still think there might be a few holes in the plot. Here's the story as it stands right now.

( Feral Wolf, original, PG-13 for sexual situations )

Any suggestions as to what else you'd like to see with these two? Because if not, I'm calling it done.

It seems like there's a piece missing from the story, but I can't figure out what it is. Maybe some opinions will give me a better idea. Technically finished, but I reserve the right to add a scene later on if I'm still unhappy with it after another read through.

As a side note: I started writing this story after reading maderr's version of Rumpelstiltskin More Precious Than Gold. Her characterization of Rumpelstiltskin was what inspired my characterization of the Piper.

( Pied Piper, PG-13, finished? )

Since I only have ONE MORE PART OF A QUESTION to go before my final mid-term is done, I'm taking a break in order to put my Halloween story up. It deserves that NC-17 warning.

( Most vampires avoided Halloween like it was a Van Helsing )